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 Jun 17 2004, 01:27 PM
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Heres another poem that many of my classmates liked in my 9th grade language class
TEDDY BEAR I sit on the shelf Waiting to be bought Watching little kids That must have thought "I want the stuffed bear, I want that bear now. I dont want stupid beads to put in my hair All i want is that stuffed bear!" Their moms look at the price tag As their face gets disgusted As they walk away mad their child angry But then i saw her The one that would buy me As she walked over and said "I want that one, Daddy!" The man reaches up and grabs my box Brings me to the check out counter And then hands the later 50 bucks Im placed in a bag Knowing i have an owner Then out of the store I know the search is over. -Nicole |
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Jun 17 2004, 01:44 PM
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Aww thats cute. But $50 for a teddy bear is a little overdoing it there...!
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Jun 17 2004, 01:50 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 376 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 17,265 |
expensive fabric tho the bears made out of...:)
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Jun 17 2004, 01:54 PM
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old school member Group: Member Posts: 1,796 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 843 |
I think it should be retitle as, "Expensive [probably gucci] Teddy Bear"
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Jun 17 2004, 01:56 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 376 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 17,265 |
o haha!it could be a Burberry Bear! haha..:)
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Jun 17 2004, 01:57 PM
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old school member Group: Member Posts: 1,796 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 843 |
That works too
 I liked mine...
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Jun 17 2004, 03:40 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 376 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 17,265 |
haha! burberry is still cute tho..haha!
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Jun 19 2004, 12:37 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,077 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,904 |
Aww how cute. I love teddy bears!
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