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Smarmosaur
post Sep 13 2007, 08:29 PM
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If this doesn't belong here, please move.

I made this for American Geography. It's due tomorrow and I've already printed it at school so I'm not going to change anything but opinions would help for the future. Post away. :]]


 
 
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LadyXTor
post Sep 13 2007, 08:32 PM
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The fonts you used for "jewelery" and stuff was really hard to read. The colors and organization are nice though. :)
 
omgomgKATHY
post Sep 13 2007, 08:42 PM
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yeah it took me a while to realize it said aztec, mayans, incas. but it's pretty good for a class project.
 
Relentless
post Sep 13 2007, 09:59 PM
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It has a nice set up but I do agree about the font, that it's kind of hard to read.
 
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post Sep 13 2007, 10:21 PM
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here are some things i wanted to point out: you should align the two bottom right pictures according to the box above it, and also align the words inside that box. the text alignment is inconsistent throughout the various pieces of text on the poster; you should use one type of alignment, and stick to it. avoid having things too close to the edge, especially something as dark as the picture on the bottom left corner: it can throw off focus and make the poster a bit unbalanced. also, try to establish a border, the text goes past the blue box on the right, making the poster look less neat. Also, if you box one piece of text, you should box all others; consistency is a big part of making a presentation come together.

overall, you did a good job in terms of filling up the poster and not having too many large blank spots. I actually also like the font you used for the title, though I suggest finding an easier to read font for the subheaders. The text in the title actually compliments the aztec jewelry very well; nicely done.

I may have stated a lot of things in the first part of this comment, but don't feel discouraged or anything, because that's the last thing I want you to feel. You still did a great job, and i wouldn't have given the suggestions if i thought you wouldn't be able to improve or handle them.
 
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post Sep 14 2007, 02:52 PM
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QUOTE(Relentless @ Sep 13 2007, 10:59 PM) *
It has a nice set up but I do agree about the font, that it's kind of hard to read.


I agree too, but i like the colors you used
 
Smarmosaur
post Sep 16 2007, 02:04 PM
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thanks for the critique.
I understand about the text now, after looking at it for a while. I also thought about a border but I completely forgot about it.
thanks again. :]
 

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