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xblast196
post Aug 20 2007, 08:31 AM
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let's try this again.



i think it's pretty good, but again, constructive criticism is great :)
 
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post Aug 20 2007, 11:35 AM
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I think it looks nice. But it isnt anything special. Its just a sun ray background, with two palm tree brushes. shrug.gif Try adding more things to it, to lengthen its meaning. thumbsup.gif
 
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post Aug 20 2007, 12:42 PM
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it's realy plain...you should add more color to it or something like angie (SinfullySweet) said
 
xtrancie
post Aug 20 2007, 01:56 PM
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Erm, you could've put something more than just 2 palm trees and the sunray effect in the bg? especially they're both just the same color. Even a beginner can do this less than 5 mins.
 
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post Aug 20 2007, 01:57 PM
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I'm getting nothing.
 
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post Aug 20 2007, 01:58 PM
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^2x (To Trancie) Some beginners can't even make things like this, especially not in 5 minutes...
Maybe you and I could, and others who are more advanced, but not a beginner.

Anyway, you did the sun rays! I'm glad those tutorials worked for you. :]
It is somewhat plain, but it looks pretty good. I like the font.
 
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post Aug 20 2007, 02:06 PM
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^it's just 2 brushes and a sun ray, how hard could it be? O_o
 
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post Aug 20 2007, 03:05 PM
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This one looks kinda better than the Lindsay Lohan one you made earlier, in my opinion. The colors go well together. However, I do agree that there's nothing too special about it. Try adding more to it .. even more color. wink.gif
 
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post Aug 20 2007, 03:25 PM
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well pretty hard for someone who has not idea how to do it...
as for the brushes thats something that can take a few seconds but the bg nah
anyway i agree that it looks a bit plain maybe if the brushes were smaller and instead of white black because with the sun behind something the item or the person is darker not lighter
and for the sky, try yellow and orange hues to match that of the sun instead of the blue you have going on
but i agree that it does look nice and the font was a lovely choice
 
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post Aug 20 2007, 07:53 PM
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QUOTE(xtrancie @ Aug 20 2007, 03:06 PM) *
^it's just 2 brushes and a sun ray, how hard could it be? O_o



first of all, i know it's plain, i was basically just trying out the sunray feature.

second, i needed a tutorial for it, so that was the first time i've done it.

but. i'll add more color to my other stuff next time.
 
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post Aug 21 2007, 05:25 PM
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I think it does what it's supposed to, not every piece has to be smothered in brushes and noise to create the desired effect.

The font is perfect and the colour fits well, very vice city.

Try making the sun-rays a little stronger.
 
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post Aug 21 2007, 06:34 PM
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QUOTE(xTHExDUDEx @ Aug 21 2007, 06:25 PM) *
The font is perfect and the colour fits well, very vice city.


i may or may not have got the idea from vice city... <_<
 
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post Aug 22 2007, 06:48 AM
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hrm well it certainly is a blast from the past.

did you notice that the left palm tree has been cut off? and i think the trees being a different intensity and boldness is off putting. if they were both the same style as the second palm tree, it would be less straining to the eye. and the color is a bit bright, but of course what is the 80s without the brightness.
 
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post Aug 22 2007, 06:00 PM
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i like the idea, but as everyone has said it need a bit more. but good job with the sun ray effect thumbsup.gif
 

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