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 Jul 29 2007, 11:26 PM
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 Communication breakdown.  Group: Member Posts: 603 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 552,691  |
Take this oath
And meet me under The cold white tree Where we can grow old Together again We'll take it's warmth And blow out the lights Make sure we're climbing down To make it all right I'll take the leap If you're there to catch me And you can bet I'll miss Face down, but still standing Together we can run amok |
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Jul 30 2007, 10:46 PM
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 ;) Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
I think of a couple and a tree house for some reason when I read this. I think it's beautiful, personally.
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Aug 2 2007, 07:27 PM
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That's sweet. Short, simple and playful. It's definitely a smiler poem. =)
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Aug 8 2007, 11:26 AM
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That was really sweet. Something I would give to my loved one to tell them I want to spend the rest of my time with them.
 great job.
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