your words. leave scars., all roses have their thorns. |
 Jun 8 2004, 01:22 AM
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 hugs&kisses  Group: Member Posts: 98 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,728  |
just something i wrote a few days ago. i think yesterday? anyway..this is for a friend, and every line is kind of a meaning for something in her life.
she filled her bath with roses showered her body with their petals ripped the thorns from their stems and cut her life away first line: her boyfriend, the rose in her life. second line: how he treats her, his love to her. third line: the words that he said to hurt her. fourth line: what the words do to her. =] hope you guys like that |
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stina your words. leave scars. Jun 8 2004, 01:22 AM
TiNaBaBY074 omgosh that is realli good! so intelligent too... Jun 8 2004, 02:25 AM ComradeRed So many suicide poems... Jun 8 2004, 11:52 AM Huggins very nice! Jun 15 2004, 09:25 PM Winter Short but so so meaningful. Jun 16 2004, 04:39 AM emptyminded That was such a simple poem but it very meaningful... Jun 16 2004, 06:42 AM
Kathleen I could've sworn I replied in this already. Hm... Jun 17 2004, 12:37 PM  |
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