yea a poem for a writing contest |
 Apr 11 2005, 10:01 PM
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it was a spur of the moment thing i am sorta iffy on it so what do you think? btw it would nice if i could have suggestions for a title. i am bad at titles =/:
running from life but getting no where someone please help me! trapped inside a glass box screaming loudly though no one seems to hear can't you see my smile is fake? i'm crying for help someone please help me take me away from this horrible place i wanna go home! but where is home? has everyone abandoned me? where are the people i thought i could trust someone please help me! i'm bleeding now the knife's fallen to the floor someone please help me crying tears of shame i wanna go home! some please take me home i'm waiting for my hero where are you? someone please help me! hello? is anyone there? why can't you hear my screams? please help me..before it's too late |
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ItzOnlySydney yea a poem for a writing contest Apr 11 2005, 10:01 PM
mystah_danger I just love the expression it sends to me. I'm... Apr 12 2005, 01:33 AM
ItzOnlySydney QUOTE(mystah_danger @ Apr 12 2005, 1:33 AM)I ... Apr 12 2005, 03:50 PM sikdragon if you like it like that make it into someone yell... Apr 12 2005, 02:56 AM racoons > you bomb-squad... as the title
like an emotional time... Apr 12 2005, 03:52 PM mystah_danger QUOTEthanks so much! i thought ppl would say s... Apr 12 2005, 07:06 PM xXirockhardXx I like it. Good job. =] Apr 12 2005, 09:13 PM  |
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