My story, Aka Tenshi Senki...., that probably never be finished. Options

[RaphieRyouga]

Aka Tenshi Senki: Prelude



In the year 6271, much of what we now expected such as flying cars and advanced technology were not seen in this future. This time in the world has been desecrated by corruption and the struggle for power. War has spread throughout the continents we once knew are no more. The ground of Earth has been stripped down to its original form, desolate and uninhabited. Maxwell Hanes, the chief general of the United Regime; formerly known as the United States, has taken the position of President and has ordered nationwide restoration. At the same time the United Regime was being born, the continents of the East; Japan, China, Philippines and Korea, join to form the "Golden Nations."

As years past, the world slowly became what it once was. For a few more years the world was at peace. Then he came, a former general of the Golden Nations, Tsung Tsu. He came as a peace agent of the Golden Nations, he spoke with Hanes


"Greeting, General Hanes."Tsu said.

"What is your business here?" Hanes shot back.

"I am only here to warn you of what my superiors are planning." Tsu calmly explained.

"What do you mean by this?"Hanes exclaimed.

"Simply put, they are planning to attack your people." Tsu responded.

"This cant be, I was speaking with your Emperor only a few days ago!" Hanes yelled.

"He was only here to observe your current state, which he said was pathetic." Tsu replied.

"Pathetic…how dare he." He angrily exclaimed

"I'll leave you to your business now." Tsu grinned maliciously as he walked away.

At that very moment, Hanes called, James Mackly; the head of the armed forces and stated they send an immediate attack against the Golden Nations. Demanding to make sure they leave a mark on the Golden States, he requested for an air strike as well as a ground force.

Days after, half of the Golden States was in shambles, the rest almost completely destroyed. The four representatives of the four nations that made up the Golden Nations met in the heart of the states, Tokyo. There, Japan's Daisuke Ishikawa, China's Jing Wu, Korea's Hae-Yul and Philippines Sammy Pacquiao, discusses the current situation of their crumbling lands. This discussion lasted for almost six hours until they decided to declare war against the U.R.




And this is where the story begins….


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Ok.That just the prelude and it not going to be the exact thing once I'm finished(hopefully).

Just tell me what you think and hopefully you guys will be nice.