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RIOT!, by Paramore |
Jul 18 2007, 11:34 AM
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![]() appealing only because they are just that unappealing ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 211 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 143,673 |
for me, this is some of my best work, but i bet it doesn't compare to more than half the kids on here.
ehm. before you say it, the squigglies coming out of the circle thing could be better, i know. and i like simplicity :]] clickiieeee |
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Jul 18 2007, 11:35 AM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 790 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 541,232 |
i don't see a picture anywhere
edit.. sorry nvm. i'm a dork. that didn't pay enough attention. 1.) I love love love the way you did your navigation 2.) I don't like where the music is located. Try to hide it a little better. |
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Jul 18 2007, 11:42 AM
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![]() sang loves hayden. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,373 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,687 |
Layout is interesting, I just don't like how it seemed like it was cutt off on the right. Other then that, it's good.
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Jul 18 2007, 12:54 PM
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![]() define our lives for us. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 11,656 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,293 |
I don't like the cutting off on the right either. I also think it looks a bit unorganized/somewhat messy. I think it's 'cause the fon't s REAL small, but when you first go to the page, all you notice is hayley. And then the rest of the people who don't seem so important. Haha. Then the text comes last cuz it's just.. like, there. ionno. I think the navi is pretty unique, though.
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Jul 18 2007, 01:31 PM
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![]() You'll find me in your dreams. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,536 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 114,010 |
Why is it just that tiny bit too big? Why? It makes me want to scroll over because I think there's more content, but there's not. Like everyone said, the navi's nice.
And no one mentioned the fact that her hand just, like, cuts off on the left. It's like, WHOA! Back up, back up . . . What? Oh, and like Toby (twilightsamurai) said . . . You could put a tiny bit more focus on, like, the content. I'm not saying that huge images are bad! But y'know, people go to your myspace to learn about you. They don't go there to search for a little to find what they're looking for. Does that make sense? |
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Jul 18 2007, 06:56 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 371 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 530,773 |
Looks good. But for the Paramore picture... It's cut off to the right. It would be better if the links were lined up. Other than that, good job.
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Jul 18 2007, 09:30 PM
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![]() Naomi loves you. Y'all may call me NaNa ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,925 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 427,774 |
Like everyone stated at the right the picture and half the navigation is cut off. I like the way you did your navigation. My suggesting is to maybe make the picture smaller and hid the top navigation because it defects the purpose of your navigation. I think you should of did more editing to the picture because it looks unfinished to me. You have a few unnecessary links in your navigation as well. I think you should have included the main links but I guess that's why you kept the top navigation visible. I like the left side with all your information like about me etc, etc. But I would of made the font a little bigger, 12px is nice. Overall your layout is too big. If i had to rate this from 1-10, I would of gave it a 5 because of the way you have things organize. Your layout looks messy. It has a undone feel to it.
I like your layout a lot but it has a lot of flaws just with the design and organization. |
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Jul 18 2007, 09:37 PM
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![]() ;) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
The horizontal scrollbar is sort of annoying. I like the image maps, but the two on the right (xx,yy) I don't really like them, and I think the image maps would look better if they were rollovers I also don't like how I can see the line on from the image of the people, I think you should have feathered it. The headers look nice on the sidebar. I think this layout is a bit large too. But keep trying, and you'll get better.
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Jul 21 2007, 06:18 PM
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![]() d@niel ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,267 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,453 |
i think it looks okay
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Jul 21 2007, 09:05 PM
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i think the navigation is too big personally. I really like the main image and content headers though
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