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 Jun 14 2004, 12:26 AM
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 dripping destruction  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929  |
i hear your voice
but not the words what is this you say? i hear my heart ripped in two why will not you stay? what did i do to deserve it to end this way? your words hurt and you don't care please just go away. and leave me to my pain. short. more spur of the moment. impromptu. but, inspired by experience. |
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Jun 15 2004, 08:33 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,077 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,904 |
It's short, simple and to the point. But I like it coz it relates to me a lot.
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Jun 15 2004, 03:17 PM
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 What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
I like this one. For surely it can relate to a lot of people. Cool.
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Jun 15 2004, 08:08 PM
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Hehe very true - short and down to the point. Very nice.
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Jun 15 2004, 09:23 PM
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 Huggs Group: Member Posts: 39 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,457 |
i can relate to this poem! its great!
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