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 Jul 10 2007, 04:24 PM
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AlwayzbJenny  Group: Member Posts: 26 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 36,926  |
i made a vector of Rihanna...it took me bout 8 hrs? to make...i dunno but it took me a long time. i'd say this is my first "real" vector. so wut do u guys think?
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Jul 10 2007, 04:40 PM
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 ;) Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
The face looks nice, but I think you should practicing on your shading and details because her back needs some work. But keep trying!
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Jul 10 2007, 05:28 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
^yah work on your colors/shading, other than that, lovely
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Jul 10 2007, 08:33 PM
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 im with the marching band Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
i agree
i like it but the shading needs work  -anthony |
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Jul 11 2007, 04:53 AM
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 So um yeah Group: Official Designer Posts: 745 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 459,873 |
QUOTE(_cheekz_ @ Jul 10 2007, 09:33 PM)  i agree i like it but the shading needs work -anthony Agreed... Really good for a first time! |
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Jul 11 2007, 02:44 PM
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 d@niel Group: Member Posts: 1,267 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,453 |
yea, basically more layers would be nice, giving it more smoothness...but i like the font a lot
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Jul 12 2007, 10:16 PM
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the back and legs need a bit more shading as everyone has said.. I'm not a big fan on the font color, but other then that it's an excellent vector.
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Jul 13 2007, 04:12 PM
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AlwayzbJenny Group: Member Posts: 26 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 36,926 |
ok...i made a few changes accordin to all of your responses
click here for the image does it look better? |
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Jul 13 2007, 04:29 PM
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 ‹(. .)› Group: Official Member Posts: 2,367 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,089 |
^ looks good. definitely better.
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Jul 13 2007, 04:32 PM
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;) Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
QUOTE(alwayzbjenny @ Jul 13 2007, 04:12 PM) ok...i made a few changes accordin to all of your responses click here for the image does it look better? It looks better! Good job on improving it! Keep making more vectors and you'll keep progressing and getting better. |
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Jul 13 2007, 06:50 PM
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 stop staring >_> Group: Member Posts: 497 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 455,389 |
pretty good try for first time
- more transitional layers - work on the eyelashes - more hair strand your lips are pretty good for first time =) |
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Jul 13 2007, 07:42 PM
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 What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
I think the curves around her hair and body should be a little bit smoother. I like the face and hair, nicely done. But I agree, the shading needs some work and her back looks..funky to me.
 But it's pretty good for a first "real" vector. Keep it up!
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