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What's there, Random stuff
dispn0ygonekrazy
post Jun 11 2007, 01:40 AM
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A random poem I wrote down from random thoughts, random meanings, feelings so yeah a little hard to understand I think lol. but whatever

my eyes dried up, tears fall no more
even if I try, my heart ache sores

whats there to see and to feel
if nothing in my mind, can be real

like living in a fantasy,
its too good to be true
nothing more, than a memory
written down as a clue

pieces of a puzzle, nowhere to be found
replaying the same action, going around

whats there to solve and to think
if everything disappears in a blink

like living in a fantasy,
its too good to be true
nothing more, than a memory
written down as a clue

a broken record, loops a song
as a forgotten melody plays along

whats there to listen if nothings here
whats there to see if no ones here

whats there to solve if everythings gone
whats there to feel with these feelings forgone

whats there to believe, whats there to trust
if everything i touch turns into dust
 
ThatMcFLYGirl
post Jun 11 2007, 11:42 AM
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I like it
especially this part:
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like living in a fantasy,
its too good to be true
nothing more, than a memory
written down as a clue

a broken record, loops a song
as a forgotten melody plays along
 

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