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Jun 8 2007, 01:58 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 8 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 485,713 |
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Jun 8 2007, 02:02 PM
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im with the marching band ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
save my eyes please.the writing is to hard to read
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Jun 8 2007, 02:02 PM
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![]() ;) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
That's pretty good for your first try. I like your Hip-Hop style. The background looks nice, although I wish it were brighter. I also like the stroke around Beyoncè.
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Jun 8 2007, 02:17 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 8 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 485,713 |
thanks!
im going to try another one! |
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Jun 8 2007, 02:18 PM
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![]() ;) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
^That's good. Keep practicing, and you'll keep progressing! :)
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Jun 8 2007, 02:56 PM
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![]() <3 KJJ ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 59 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 531,342 |
oo very pretty. i like the brushes and the words. :)
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Jun 8 2007, 02:59 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 107 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 417,055 |
It is pretty good for your first.
However like _cheeks_ said the font is a little hard to read. More so the "Dont Stop The" part. Keep it up! |
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Jun 8 2007, 03:32 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 8 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 485,713 |
thanks
lol, i didnt realize the font was that hard to read when i was makin it, i was so excited i was actually gettin it done! |
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Jun 8 2007, 03:37 PM
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![]() d@niel ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,267 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,453 |
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Jun 8 2007, 06:43 PM
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![]() sang loves hayden. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,373 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,687 |
It looks good as you're first. However, it seems a little basic. It's just like dumping brushes on it. Other then that, it's nice.
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Jun 8 2007, 06:46 PM
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![]() Pocketful of Sunshine ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,690 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,004 |
Since this is your first, I'll go easy.
First off, don't use those fonts. They're hard to read and are quite.. n00by. Second, don't just put brushes. Be a little more creative and use other tools. And last, keep on trying. EDIT// |
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Jun 8 2007, 07:10 PM
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![]() ٩(●̮̮̃•̃)۶ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 1,403 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,173 |
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Jun 9 2007, 01:14 AM
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![]() So um yeah ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 745 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 459,873 |
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Jun 9 2007, 09:19 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 8 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 485,713 |
lol i was just tryin to make it fun
thanks for the input! |
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