Three of my "depressing poems" Options

[RAWRstephishere]

A bunch of people told me my poems are really good, but I think they are crap.

For the first two poems, my teacher gave me a long talk about depression and made me see the counselor.


First one.
I feel sick to my stomach.
I don't know what to do.
I have no one to turn to.

These lies are building up.
I know you don't care.
Can't you see?
Are you blind?
I'm hurting inside.

Yet you go just pretending everything's okay.
We both know its not.
It's the farthest thing from right.
Why aren't you doing anything?
I know you can stop it.
Buy why aren't you?
It's killing me inside.
You choose not to see.
You choose not to bother.

Cant you see?
I'm dying inside.

The second one
Im lost in this world.
Everything is comming down on me.
Im loosing hope.
I wish someone could come save me.
Save me from this nightmare.
I think Im going to explode.
Someone, come save me.

Save me from this hellish world and all the people here.
I cant escape on my own.
I need someone to help me.
I scream and scream.
No one seems to listen.
They pass me like they dont even notice. Like they dont even care.
LOUDER. I scream.
But no one seems to hear.


Third one.She's just another face in the crowd,
Just someone your pass.
A glimpse is all you give her.
Shes not worth your time.

You would never guess that your all she thinks about.
Youll never know how long shes waited for someone like you.

Do you even give a shit?
No. No.

Why would you even care?
She's just another face in the crowd.



Dont give me that sympathy crap. Tell me what you really think of my poems.