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 May 12 2007, 06:28 PM
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May 12 2007, 10:06 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
You're getting better. However, in the second one, the Zac Efron one, you used wayyy tooo manyyy textures. His face looks like he got in a fight with a paint brush. And the colours, are, well, interesting. And the white area behind the text doesn't really flow well with the rest of the piece.
Oh gosh, i'm sorry for critizing you so much. The first one, though, I reealllyyyy like. Its just the second one that could use some work. |
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May 13 2007, 03:03 AM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
First one -Seems pretty crowded. I like some of the image placement. But the text and a few of the brushes don't fit well and make it look really odd.
Second - Its overall too crowded, and blended odd in some places. Adding a white spot for text doesn't look right. The whole placement would look better if you sort of did the text like the first one accept make sure the text matched the image. The colors of this one I like, but the placement and blending could be a little better. Sorry I don't mean to be harsh.  Overall I like the first one best. :] |
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May 13 2007, 09:08 AM
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i agree with toya
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May 18 2007, 10:38 PM
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 Oh Wow ... Group: Official Designer Posts: 688 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 468,522 |
I love love love the first one. The second one is really good too, that white box bothers me though. I like the colors and combination and overall idea though. =D
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May 18 2007, 10:43 PM
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There's a big, blurry white spot in the 2nd one on the top left. Just something I noticed.
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May 20 2007, 02:59 PM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
I agree with Toya.
They're both really good, though.  For the second one, try to blend a little more, because you can still see the corners on some. And, the textures you used in the middle. You could have lessened the opacity. Overall, they're pretty good. 
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May 24 2007, 08:53 AM
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I agree with toya you did a pretty good job on the first one. The second one i just don't like
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