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 Apr 26 2007, 05:40 PM
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Working on this one for my art class. I think I'm gonna change the background, it looks weird :x The face is kinda ehh but oh well. I got the picture of the ballerina from a drawing book
 Hmm did this one real quick when I was bored & flipping through a magazine & came across this in an ad haha. Thought it would be a fun one, with the odd angle/position the woman is in :]  Yeahh, I'm drawing a portrait of my friend during our 15min reading periods at school haha. Obviously, it isn't quite finished yet...I haven't had much time to work on it.  I'll update if I make any more prgress on the first & last ones C&C appreciated  Please, attack them, I need it 
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Apr 26 2007, 08:31 PM
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They're good overall, but you should work on the smoothness of your gradation. I can see a lot of stroke-marks. I love the first one.
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Apr 26 2007, 08:34 PM
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 Peggy. Group: Member Posts: 2,508 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 214,025 |
The first one is really well done.
The second one...I don't know what's with her arm, but that curvy line looks weird and should be more blended in by shading. Oh, and I suggest you make the hair look smoother and more natural. I couldn't comment on the third one because you are not done with it. |
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Apr 26 2007, 08:36 PM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
I'm just amazed that you finished that much on the last one in 15 minutes.
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Apr 27 2007, 02:10 PM
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Thanks guys
QUOTE you should work on the smoothness of your gradation. I can see a lot of stroke-marks. Hm..yeah, I see that now...thanks! QUOTE I don't know what's with her arm, but that curvy line looks weird and should be more blended in by shading. Yeah...that was a little curl of hair...I guess it doesn't quite look right, hm? I'll fix it. QUOTE I'm just amazed that you finished that much on the last one in 15 minutes. Oh! Heh, no, it's 15 min per day. That was in about four or five 15min periods :x So about an hour or so total |
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Apr 27 2007, 10:39 PM
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 we go a-drowning Group: Member Posts: 964 Joined: Apr 2007 Member No: 519,725 |
i dont mean to be a spoil sport.... but i was in wizard art shop yersterday and saw a drawing with pencil book with the EXACT same ballerina on the cover as the one in your 1st drawing. if your gonna copy , give credit to the original artist.
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Apr 28 2007, 12:46 AM
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QUOTE i dont mean to be a spoil sport.... but i was in wizard art shop yersterday and saw a drawing with pencil book with the EXACT same ballerina on the cover as the one in your 1st drawing. if your gonna copy , give credit to the original artist. Agh, I thought I had put the credit in there...crap, sorry, I did give credit when I was posting it on another site at the same time, must've forgotten on this one. Thanks for pointing that out
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May 5 2007, 01:20 PM
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First and second=awesome, the nose on the second is weird, but it's still ahmahzingg
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