MY POEM!!!, I wrote it today Options

[Ladii_D1809]

I'm waaaaaaaaaaaaay to shy to show my moms and my friends soooo since I really don't have to see you guys...and I don't know you ppl all that well will you guys read it and tell me how its on a scale of 0 to 10?
Here it goes:
You see me here in my own pain, and what do you do?
You ignore, you walk pass with a hello and nothing more!
All my anger, sadness, and gloom doesn't impress you.
What will I have to do?
I see you in your happiness, and get jealous of you!
I wish I could go back in time where I was happy, and fine.
Will you ever see that I'm not okay?
That its all cause of you?
That its not a game?
That all my feelings are true. -Davon aka Ladii d
That's all
Is it okay pleassssssse tell me!!!