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Twlight Falls
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post Mar 4 2007, 03:26 AM
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Ugh, I misspelled "twilight" in the topic title. _dry.gif
Another short poem:

Twilight Falls

It was pouring emotion
on a twilight of false insanity
with glass lust painted
on the abyss for a sky.
Engulfed, the shadow of black autumn
knelt for ungiven defeat.
 
 
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post Mar 16 2007, 06:42 AM
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I like it=]
but i think it needs alittle more detail, and lines.
but overall i like it.
well done.
 
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