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[femmefatale4160]

It's not perfect, but it's not half bad. Comments or criticisms?

I just want you to know
I want you to know that I'm done, I'm done
I once thought that you were the one, the one
But you can't commit to me.
I just wanted to show
I wanted to show that I still, I still
Want you and I always will, I will
But you would rather be free.

I came here to say
I came here today
to tell you that this is the end

Chorus:
Will you miss me when you sleep tonight?
Will you miss me twenty years from now?
Do you think you'll ever want me back,
that you'll win my heart somehow?
Call me when you reach Nirvana
I'll sure be glad to hear from you
But don't think I'll come running back
'Cause I'm done wasting tears on you.

I just wanted to say
I wanted to say that I win, I win
I've got a new chance to begin, begin
While you're left to dwell alone.
I just want to display
I just want to show that I know, I know
I know I need to let you go, oh go
In fact I've always known.

I came here to say
I came here today
to tell you that you're not the one

Chorus 2x

Running past the one I love
Don't know what I'm thinking of
Time to say good-bye...

Chorus 2x