...presence of an Angel, your help/critique/ Help please Options

[gr00vyswordsman]

This is to my dearest Love, I see my future when I look in her eyes
for She bare so much fruit in my life... I would love for comments and Critique/suggestions :) hehe

...touched by the presence of an Angel!

Eventhough we are no near,
You're just as near as the remote control.
Like a lovely blue sky so clear.
Becasue I see Your Love written all over the Perfect sky.
To me, clear blue-skys are like beautiful Souls.

Eventhough we are no near,
Our Hearts goes all the way,
with you, each day is Valentines Day.
My heart asks, has it been love for 100 years?
Kathleen, I Believe I found true Love,
We lived Heavenly weeks in Heaven
felt like King and Queen.
Outside God's love in my Life,
Cant recall a week enjoying everlasting Bliss
such as that.
To me, clear blue-skys are like beautiful Souls,
Touched by the presence of an Angel