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Hate.
*I Shot JFK*
post Feb 18 2007, 02:44 PM
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Hating everything
Stopped to see the flower, and it's beautiful
All the little pieces together
= Nothing
But apart
One at a time
We can digest
Suck the calories from the world
And grow fat, lazy, and solid
While we sit and learn to love
The hate
Which, drawn from the flowers
(Which themselves are beautiful)
Comprise the daily grind
Of three meals a day
Round the dinner table
(Can one person sit 'round' a table?)
Chopped flowers
On a finely chopped base
Of equally beautiful small children
Who, failing to eat their hate
Have yet to pull up a chair.
 

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I Shot JFK   Hate.   Feb 18 2007, 02:44 PM
mishyerr   Although I fail to understand what it means, I lik...   Feb 18 2007, 08:04 PM
oX_Muh_Nirvana_Xo   .. this is f**ked up.. nice job   Feb 18 2007, 08:19 PM
Kathleen   I like, except the random equal sign. I know it go...   Feb 19 2007, 01:15 AM
lalalaLANUH   I dig the last few lines. QUOTEChopped flowers On...   Feb 19 2007, 10:56 AM
Chérie.   I got the main idea of the piece but the transitio...   Feb 19 2007, 11:48 PM
Señorita Semi-Automatic   I love the beat, very choppy. Were you going for t...   Feb 20 2007, 12:05 AM
JakeKKing   RE: Hate.   Feb 24 2007, 12:25 AM
Uronacid   I don't know much about literature... I don...   Feb 27 2007, 12:47 AM
just_rissa   wow. It's nice.   Feb 27 2007, 01:03 AM
The Abominable C-Pillar   http://www.createblog.com/forums/index.php?showtop...   Feb 27 2007, 01:13 AM


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