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 Mar 1 2007, 09:12 AM
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Depression Depression Just One More Subliminal Suggestion Before the Suicidal Tendencies That Won't Let Us Be Just Lets Us Bleed Just to see us Cry Eyes bloodshot red With the gun to our head Just to chicken out And be Depressed again Comment and Crit Please? |
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Mar 2 2007, 05:26 PM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
hm, i like it a lot actually.
and these lines here: QUOTE Eyes bloodshot red With the gun to our head Just to chicken out And be Depressed again nice way to end it. |
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Mar 2 2007, 06:44 PM
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 young enough to not give a f*ck Group: Member Posts: 1,149 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,060 |
but but it's too depressing :[
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Mar 2 2007, 07:14 PM
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 Jake - The Unholy Trinity / Premiscuous Poeteer. Group: Member Posts: 1,272 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 411,316 |
 Wow, I feel like killing myself. Or just punching the person who wrote this.
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Mar 2 2007, 08:06 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 158 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 505,941 |
lolz,
yay for me =] |
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Mar 16 2007, 06:44 AM
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i like it.=] have nothing really to say bad about it
QUOTE That Won't Let Us Be Just Lets Us Bleed Just to see us Cry Eyes bloodshot red With the gun to our head I liked that part.. lol its most of it 
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