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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,188 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 364,198 ![]() |
^Since I am now hosted by Reili > http://blewmyalloanceonmanga.net I can now create designs based on anime/manga and not be deleted. I have had designer's block ever since my last LXS design and created bad ones when I tried. I wanted these two to be different and I hope they are. I love being random so "Haphazard" was the first version I created. The second version is currently untitled, but I may change that after comments/critiques. Preview Version 1 here and Version 2 here. I took everyones advice on alignment and size so they won't be empty; I also decreased the size of my canvas to prevent this problem also.
Please do not complain about the grid line pattern on Version 2; I felt it suited the design well. |
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Ricky,
![]() Anyway, I really like the first one. It looks great. The images are in all the right places and the colors are perfect. And it figures the only problem I really had with the second one was the grid ![]() |
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t-t-t-toyaaa ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 ![]() |
First one - Its pretty nice, I like how eveythng goes. You always find a way to fit in a pattern. :]
Second one - Its ok, I like the first one best though. Oddly I don't see it really fitting together well. The background seems to have a little to many brushes in it (if thats what the green is). Its hard to tell what color scheme you are going for. You have a type of red , blue, yellow-ish color, green, a lighter pink, and a lighter version of the red you used. Seems like a rainbow. But its ok. |
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![]() You'll find me in your dreams. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,536 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 114,010 ![]() |
... The grid itself on the second one isn't what bothers me, in truth. It's this weird style issue I have ... You see, I find that your designs usually blend towards a blank sort of canvas. Like, at the bottom of the first image you have a sort of image fade-out, yeah?
But the grid kinda doesn't cover that. And that's sorta what I like 'bout your designs. Unless, maybe it was a little smaller and used as a header for a table-y sort of layout? As for the first one, I love it. ^_^ Nothing else to say. |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,188 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 364,198 ![]() |
^Thanks everyone. The first version I was going for a random/rainbow them, and the second version was a red/dark-red theme (some light maroon/browns). I only have the canvas blank towards the bottom and right sides on the second version so the pattern will align without any problems. I guess I am a bit weird about that; I seem to use it a lot (if not most of my designs). I only want the pattern to align correctly.
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 ![]() |
Wow the first one is really nice, going for a totalyly different look from what I've seen. I love the colors and images in the second one.
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![]() Death is a promise given to us at birth ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 ![]() |
i like v2 better.
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![]() XOTY*06 :D ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,635 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,747 ![]() |
Both look great! I'd choose version 1 :D
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 793 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 425,250 ![]() |
... The grid itself on the second one isn't what bothers me, in truth. It's this weird style issue I have ... You see, I find that your designs usually blend towards a blank sort of canvas. Like, at the bottom of the first image you have a sort of image fade-out, yeah? But the grid kinda doesn't cover that. And that's sorta what I like 'bout your designs. Unless, maybe it was a little smaller and used as a header for a table-y sort of layout? As for the first one, I love it. ^_^ Nothing else to say. Gosh you're mean. |
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