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Breaking Chains
BeautyInATragedy
post Feb 3 2007, 08:10 PM
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It's not that you're entitled,
It's not that you should choose.
I know that you are stranded,
So I will let you loose.
But will you leave me hanging?
Once I let you go.
Or will you be here standing?
Even with our scars below.

Eh, simple and straightforward is not really my style. But I really liked this one.
 
*jayen*
post Feb 3 2007, 08:13 PM
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For something so simple and straightforward, it was really good. happy.gif
 
Ekay
post Feb 3 2007, 08:14 PM
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i agree with jayen. but i'll say this, never underestimate the impact simplicity has on people. sometimes simplicity is all it needs
 
MrStrife
post Feb 3 2007, 09:26 PM
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^ I second that. Short and Sweet.
 
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post Feb 4 2007, 08:24 AM
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QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Feb 4 2007, 10:14 AM) *
i agree with jayen. but i'll say this, never underestimate the impact simplicity has on people. sometimes simplicity is all it needs




That's good; somtimes simplicity really is all people need.
 
BeautyInATragedy
post Feb 4 2007, 08:58 AM
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Thanks guys! Some people understand things better when its simple, that's why I think people can relate better to simple things.
 

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