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 Dec 27 2006, 04:41 PM
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Empty smiles filling voids,
illusions of the truth shadows on the walls at night, drain away my youth. walking without waking waking without wanting scare away my angels as the devil comes a-haunting. tell myself that it will last, as hopes are growing thin force myself to make it through I break out another grin. Empty smiles filling voids, illuding to the truth shadows on my walls tonight, draining away youth. ---- Any criticism is welcomed. |
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bexxx Untitled poem Dec 27 2006, 04:41 PM
Jackaroe I love rhyming poems! At times, some poems obv... Dec 28 2006, 05:56 PM
femme_fatale4160 It's very good. It flows very well, and I don... Dec 28 2006, 07:26 PM  |
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