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The First time, nice poem
priyas
post Nov 17 2006, 12:49 AM
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One teenager lost in love
That’s what I was
Kissing was our hobby
I loved him
He liked me

There was a party one day
I walked upstairs
Reminiscing the childhood days
He followed me

My body went shaky
His body felt warm
Showing each other some love

I lost myself that day
My integrity and pride
For he dumped for the cheerleader
The blonde girl with the long legs and rosy lips

I lost myself to the guy of my dreams
I should have waited for the day
That I lost my most precious gift
I should have lost it to the person I am with today
 

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priyas   The First time   Nov 17 2006, 12:49 AM
yrrnotelekktric   hm. i like it.   Nov 20 2006, 03:18 PM
Gilbertay   Very straight forward yet really good.   Nov 23 2006, 10:08 PM
boo! grr...   aww this is a really sweet poem. so tell me how do...   Dec 4 2006, 03:21 AM


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