Poems..by me:D |
 Nov 23 2006, 09:50 PM
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Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 52 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 482,483  |
Relived Heartbreak
As I wish the light were here, I am relieved, shown by a tear. My heart for you remains the same, Your heart for me, now goneyet tame. I wish you were here, yet not, I smile with a tear, your happy alot. I am heartbroken with relieve, To know that your happy i believe, You need not worry on my soul, Only becuase your heart not cold. I stand here, as you walk away, I break the chains, "Be free" I say, I will always light your way of being, Even if that means you gone, im seeing. I am heartbroken with relieve, To know that your happy i believe, You need not worry on my soul, Only becuase your heart not cold. I will keep this updated...leave feedback please :D Moved to Writing (under Interests in the Community Center) This post has been edited by mona lisa: Nov 23 2006, 09:51 PM |
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Nov 24 2006, 08:51 PM
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 like, dude. Group: Member Posts: 94 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 482,285 |
I love the way you write!
Seriously, it's like music to my ears. 
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