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 Mar 11 2006, 05:08 PM
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 Hello There.  Group: Member Posts: 1,572 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 88,673  |
Crimson Tears
As I open the door I see my friend’s tears Tears of Red I ask her why, Why she feels dead Crying tears of Red She does not answer, Claiming that it was the cat, She walks away. Leaving me standing with her tears. I see her arm, At school the next day, Showing every tear Since a year I ask her to share To share her feelings of despair I tell her to go to the counselor But she doesn’t give a care. And later I see her crying, Crying tears of red. I feel anger, Anger towards my friend. Why doesn’t give a care about life? I decide to ignore. Ignore her despair. Ignore her self-hatred. Tomorrow comes, and I am called to the counselor She tells me the news. My friend is gone. With one last hard tear. She took her own life. And in her note, she told me thank you for trying. If only, I had walked to the counselor that day. My best friend would still be alive. ^^ I dont know why i wrote this. its totally fictional. IM not into death or anything. its about a person who feels regretful that they didnt do anything. |
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Mar 14 2006, 09:02 PM
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 "lal! laugh a little!" Group: Member Posts: 192 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 364,863 |
Ooh..
I love the actual story Its awesome Really But I kinda think the rhymes are a little corny But overall, great job A out of an A+ |
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Mar 30 2006, 12:17 AM
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Hello There. Group: Member Posts: 1,572 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 88,673 |
^^thanks. yeah..rhyming was hard.
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Nov 8 2006, 11:29 AM
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Hello There. Group: Member Posts: 1,572 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 88,673 |
please close this topic.
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