a certain english genius, comments appreciated! Options

[nightacer-x]

okay, i wrote this when i saw the guy i liked crying during his graduation ceremony recently.if you were in my shoes, i bet you'ld feel sad too. when i saw him crying in the hall, it was a real horrible feeling. he looked so vulnerable and fragile? anyway, so i just wrote on him. it's titled "a certain english genius" cos he topped his level for english and his essays are always featured in the school magazines. the teachers thinks that he's a genius. one even said he was hot lol. okay i should get on with my essay! comments please!
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It never occured to him that he would graduate so soon. As he sat in the hall during the cermony, he found himself reminiscing about his years in the school. All the joy and laughter shared with his friends, the demerit points he had chalked up due to his mischief and latecomings, the awards that he had achieved..

Although the ceremoy was not as spectacular as he had hoped, he was determined to not let it spoil his four years of wonderful memories. He was oblivious to the ongoings of the ceremony but vaguely remembered receiving his certificate and award on stage. Twice he was gripped with emotion and the tears threatened to fall. But he fought them back and pulled himself together. Soon the ceremony drew to a close. Together with the other graduates, he sang the school song with pride, one last time. However, he was overwhelmed by his emotions for he could no longer resist the immense pressure building up on his already heavy heart.

He then bowed his head in silence, and the tears flowed.

THE END.

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it's real sad to see the guy you like crying. it never came across my mind that he would be so emotional.. anyway, comments comments comments! =D