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picturesque, comments & criticism needed
krizannenicole
post Oct 16 2006, 04:37 PM
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in my opinion, if any of you care LOL, it's alright and i like it.
i know i can should and definitely need to improve to make it a lot better. now, it's your turn :
oh yeah, i'm going to be coding it. anyone interested in using it?

anything else i should add?
do i need to improve on anything?
should i change something?
thanks in advance for your answers _smile.gif



here's the new one =>

 
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post Oct 16 2006, 04:41 PM
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It looks pretty good, maybe some brushes?
Other than that, I like it.
 
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post Oct 16 2006, 04:43 PM
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i like it alot!
 
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post Oct 16 2006, 04:46 PM
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nice, add more. like more images, or like a nice texture foor aprts of the background, or vectorlike rays, but i like it
 
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post Oct 16 2006, 04:47 PM
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i like it.
its good.
 
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post Oct 16 2006, 05:46 PM
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Very nice! :) I like the text title and navigation. I would add more color to the images and perhaps make one or a few stand out more to keep the focus on those images. As well, in the images in the top left corner that you tripled, perhaps fade the bottom two with different opacities?
 
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post Oct 16 2006, 06:16 PM
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I like it..but I think you should do more to it!

Add some colouring effects to the images
Add more brushes
Add some more...pictures. I think they're pretty spaced out and doesn't look very well put together.


I think it's off to a great start. It just needs...more. _smile.gif
 
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post Oct 17 2006, 07:20 PM
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okay thanks! happy.gif i'll be taking your suggestions into consideration.
i know that i'll most likely be fixing the left corner duplication & adding more pictures.
i'll edit when i'm done with the additions.
 
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post Oct 17 2006, 07:37 PM
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It says 1006. =)
 
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post Oct 18 2006, 02:12 PM
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QUOTE(Schizophreak @ Oct 17 2006, 8:37 PM) *
It says 1006. =)

haha yeeah, that's the month [ 10 / october ] and year [ 06 ]
what so special about 1006 ? just wondering

p.s. i LOVE your personal site hehe (:
 
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post Oct 18 2006, 07:50 PM
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oh, erm, i thought it was supposed to be 2006. pinch.gif

thanks, btw. blush.gif
 
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post Oct 19 2006, 06:53 AM
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I like it...it's okay. But I personally don't like how the colors crash ermm.gif
 
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post Oct 19 2006, 02:38 PM
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QUOTE(Schizophreak @ Oct 18 2006, 8:50 PM) *
oh, erm, i thought it was supposed to be 2006. pinch.gif

thanks, btw. blush.gif

ohh, lol. i put the month and year. idk why. no problem about your personal site.


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But I personally don't like how the colors crash

they crash? hmm i thought they looked fine. i wanted one background color [ beige / tan ] and two other colors that stood out [ red & blue ] so you were more focused on the pictures.
 
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post Oct 19 2006, 04:09 PM
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I think its fine how it is to be honest. I don't really think it needs any brushes. I like the different color from the blues on top of the yellowish background. Nicely done flowers.gif
 
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post Oct 20 2006, 04:11 PM
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here's the new one (: i kinda like this one better, but it looks a lil crowded. don't you think?

 
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post Oct 20 2006, 04:20 PM
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Yea the extra space is taken up more which is better. I like how you don't add any brushes on top of the images, most people would have. I think the cut out of the images and how you can see all the edges. The quotes are nice too.

Looks better, and still looks great flowers.gif
 
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post Oct 20 2006, 05:12 PM
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I like the 2nd one better because its not as scattered, but I like the navigation in the first one a little better.

2nd one is better overall. thumbsup.gif
Nice job.
 
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post Oct 20 2006, 05:43 PM
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wow, the new version is MUCH better. maybe add more brushes? it seems too...clean.
 
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post Oct 20 2006, 06:16 PM
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wow you did so much bettre.nice arranging them
 
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post Oct 20 2006, 06:46 PM
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i did kind of liked the navi on the first better tho. but yeah.
 
krizannenicole
post Oct 20 2006, 11:14 PM
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thanks Infinite about the comment on not adding brushes. i felt that it would just make it look even more crowded, and i didn't really want that.

yeeah you all want the old navigation back hehe, but i think i'll leave it like this. so, i'm gonna start coding it and maybe try to get it accepted as a myspace div layout on here.
thanks again to everyone for all the comments.
 
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post Oct 21 2006, 08:17 PM
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I just saw the updated one. I have always like this style. LIke a really neat scraptbook.

The second one looks a lot better, and i really really liked the first.
Excellent job! :D
 
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post Oct 25 2006, 08:23 AM
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I like the second one better, the first one looked like the images were just floating around.
 

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