Poem/Song, tell me what you think.. |
 May 31 2004, 11:47 PM
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website designer  Group: Member Posts: 98 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,237  |
This is my song/poem
No its not okay By Sal Plasencia Is it okay If I cry today? To make you realize The aweful things you said Is it okay if cut my self again maybe once or twice three times its all the same baybay Now Is it okay? if i fall into you're lies when you look in to my eyes yeah i know you sure do care. These emotions coming from my head I wanna stay sleep in bed till im f**ked and dead These feelings that I hate I wanna kill them now whats your deal all about.. Chorus: No its not okay if you play me once or twice to make me realize that you hate me No its not okay if you break my heart again and shoot me through the very last bloody vein. No its not okay, no its not okay. is it okay? if i cry today..to make you realize the aweful things you say.. |
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Jun 1 2004, 05:02 PM
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 and then he died... Group: Member Posts: 338 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,047 |
itz awesome!!!
man.. u have talent. =] greatt job! itz really good. hehe i mite post my stupid shit up sometimes.. hahah. laterrz 
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