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Portrait of a Girl
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post Nov 4 2006, 05:17 PM
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Pencil drawing of my friend Amy. Took about an hour. It isn't finished really...keep going back and fixing little things because it's pretty rough still. Yeah.. And I know, I know, the neck/shirt aren't done. But I'm too lazy right now.. pinch.gif

C&C? I'm trying a new drawing technique...this is my last portrait: http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2490/sarahzr9.jpg ermm.gif is this new style any better? Just so you know the actualy drawing is actually a LOT sharper and more refined...my scanner made it look all fuzzy and yuck, sorry.

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EDIT (2/2/07)
finally scanned my newer version...any better?
 
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post Nov 5 2006, 04:16 PM
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wow thats awesome so far, the hair looks great, i lvoe how detailed everything is and the way you shaded
 
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post Nov 5 2006, 06:18 PM
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Thanks :)
 
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post Nov 5 2006, 08:03 PM
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I really like that!
Good job!
 
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post Dec 5 2006, 04:42 AM
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Gawd everything is rly good like super good
but i would look @ the chin a lil bit somthing just says its a lil off
but omg its rly good
keep up the awesome work
 
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post Dec 5 2006, 05:21 PM
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This is looking pretty sweet =)
As for your technique, i prefer your other picture,
however, you should use the technique that felt most comfortable to you.
but props for trying something new =)

great job!
 
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post Dec 7 2006, 06:39 PM
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Wow, it looks great. Keep working at it!
 
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post Dec 9 2006, 12:18 PM
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it's pretty awesome.

as for my criticsm.
The way you did it (shading) looks rough, if I make any sense. Your technique in this drawing looks pretty aggressive.
 
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post Dec 9 2006, 11:59 PM
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wow O_O that is so good. i'm so jealous. all my drawings look like chicken nuggets ermm.gif
 
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post Dec 10 2006, 07:38 PM
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I think it needs darker darks and lighter lights. It looks a bit to gray.

Other than that it's beautiful
 
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post Dec 13 2006, 01:04 AM
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QUOTE(Gypsy Eyes @ Dec 10 2006, 7:38 PM) *
I think it needs darker darks and lighter lights. It looks a bit to gray.

Other than that it's beautiful


exactly, if you made a better gradient of shades maybe we would be able to tell the differences in her face, but other than that its a good sketch.
 
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post Dec 13 2006, 06:32 PM
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Thanks for all your comments! That one really was just a quick sketch, I've gone over many times since I posted this and it looks much better now. As soon as I get a chance to scan it, I'll post it up here.
 
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looks good. i love how it's shaded and detailed. good job thumbsup.gif
 
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post Dec 15 2006, 10:28 PM
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I like the one of the little girl, but this one is really nice as well. The shading and everything looks good. I think which ever way you choose it will look great.
 
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post Dec 16 2006, 07:52 PM
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Wow. This is pretty good for the ammount of time it took.
The cheekbone shading looks amazing. Overall, good job. thumbsup.gif
 
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that`s gnarly. i love it.
 
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post Dec 27 2006, 01:09 AM
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oh my! if only i could draw like that :]

it's very nice! i love the shading & details.
 
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post Dec 30 2006, 09:30 PM
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How about this one?


QUOTE(Reighn @ Dec 30 2006, 9:27 PM) *
How about this one?


Sorry, i suck at adding things -_-...

*tries again
 
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post Dec 31 2006, 03:30 PM
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omg you can so draw im jealous
 
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post Jan 17 2007, 05:51 PM
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not bad. Perhaps you can sort of combine both of your techniques some how? In terms of what you have here, the sketch is great, but you've got a little too much dark, and high contrast area, without a lot of midtones. The other one seems the entire opposite, with both, you could try experimenting with some real extremes though (black and white). I really like the hair and the ears though...for some reason, not a lot of people (including myself) can get that right.
 
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post Jan 17 2007, 05:57 PM
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i really like the angles of her face
and how detailed you had it
 
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post Feb 2 2007, 07:29 PM
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*le gasp*

I finally got unlazy enough to actually scan the new version of this drawing haha. I know it's been ages, sorry pinch.gif but yeh here it is--

any better? shrug.gif
 
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post Feb 2 2007, 07:56 PM
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Oooh, the shadows look a lot nicer. thumbsup.gif
 
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i like it very much, but the there's not enough gradation where the "lines" of her face are; they look like actual lines, making it seem more cartoon-ish than realistic.
 
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post Feb 5 2007, 03:16 PM
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hers gum looks weird.. anyways thats is Hella nice..
 
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