Reality, Uronacid: Poem |
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| *Uronacid* |
 Aug 23 2006, 04:34 PM
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Reality The barriers we put up When we fail to see the test That life has put before us To keep us from being honest Always Sitting, Waiting You'll let life pass you by Aways procrastinating Who sits and waits to die Grab hold of your short world Your vapors end is near Make the best with what you have Becuase there is no time for fear Don't let it effect you You're beautiful to me You dwell upon your past Drowning in your own sea Heavy hearts in shopping carts You're looking for a reason To change the future that you have Because you feel so worthless If you want to know what this means... ask me... It's written from a 3rd person perspective.
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Aug 24 2006, 12:25 PM
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 define our lives for us.  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 11,656 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,293 |
oh i like it. i especially love some of the way you put words into rhymes, like the first verse. I especially loved the fourth one. well-written.
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Aug 25 2006, 08:04 AM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
QUOTE Always Sitting, Waiting You'll let life pass you by Aways procrastinating Who sits and waits to die my favorite part. i'll be interested to see some of the other stuff you write |
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| *My Cinderella.* |
Aug 25 2006, 10:32 AM
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Ohh. I like it. Kinda sends out a message to not take life got granted.
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| *Uronacid* |
Aug 31 2006, 10:14 AM
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Thanks so much guys :]
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