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 Aug 30 2006, 11:34 PM
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 Don't worry guys, size doesn't matter...to lesbians  Group: Member Posts: 2,444 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,066  |
Soft petals embracing silky skin
Light reigning upon beauty Fleetingly gorgeous in every way That's what it was Her most beautiful smile Like rain pouring beauty into this world only to await the rising of the glorgious sun Her most beautiful smile Jubilant and nostalgic Simple and yet extraordinary Soft and yet strong A hope passed on to the deceased Envied by every gem and every treasure Their worth burried in the world Withering into the devastating frown Of a predicament lost in her worries I hope to see again her most beautiful smile |
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Aug 31 2006, 10:53 AM
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I like it... :] I had to read it twice, but I know exactly what your talking about... I mean, when a girl smiles and it's your fualt she's smiling... It's the most beautiful thing in the world...
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Aug 31 2006, 03:41 PM
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Don't worry guys, size doesn't matter...to lesbians Group: Member Posts: 2,444 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,066 |
^exactly. A woman's most beautiful smile to a man, is the happines he caused.
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Sep 1 2006, 04:05 AM
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QUOTE(Uronacid @ Aug 31 2006, 8:53 AM)  I like it... :] I had to read it twice, but I know exactly what your talking about... I mean, when a girl smiles and it's your fualt she's smiling... It's the most beautiful thing in the world... what? it's not our fault if we made someone laugh.  idk what are yoy saying 
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Sep 1 2006, 02:04 PM
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Don't worry guys, size doesn't matter...to lesbians Group: Member Posts: 2,444 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,066 |
^I guess he made a mistake of saying fault. More like caused. And it's alright if you don't understand. Everyone has their own interpretations.
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Sep 1 2006, 11:04 PM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Oh, wow this was beautiful, it made me smile =)
The first and last stanzas were my favorites. This entire poem was beautiful, and I think my favorite one by you. Great job =) |
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Sep 2 2006, 12:31 AM
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Don't worry guys, size doesn't matter...to lesbians Group: Member Posts: 2,444 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,066 |
^lol have you read all of mine? but thanks ^_^ <3 it's nice to know I have a fan<3 and your comment seemed by heart and means a lot to me.
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