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| *reflection* |
 Aug 23 2006, 09:43 AM
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I suck at making layouts, but i tried.
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Aug 23 2006, 09:57 AM
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 Senior Member  Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
looks good, i think yo ushuold blend the brushes in on the bottom more,hmm i liek the blending on the images,whats the white blurry sttuff on the left? eh i cant explain what i see :[
random paint splatters-i dont like them on the girls body on the right down |
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Aug 23 2006, 12:57 PM
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the blue/red/maroon splatter brushes look WAY out of place (the ones on the edge) as well as the one in the sort of middle and the one off to the left
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| *mona lisa* |
Aug 23 2006, 01:04 PM
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The blending itself looks good. But I would have added color to the images. Sharpened them a bit and added image effects. The paint splatters do look out of place. I would have also blended the images with the background. The ripped effect on the edges is nice, but I don't think it works well here. Maybe fade away the edges and stick brushes on top of those areas?
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Aug 23 2006, 01:28 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
^ I agree. You can still see way to much blur in the image and the way you cut the image doesn't fit in this case. If you wanted something more outrageous in the cutting you should use Kristina's clipping mask tutorial, just watch the way it comes out. Add more brushes overall, not just in the corner. Use diferent ones, not just those same splatters. Then I think it would be better. The colors aren't working well for me. They just don't all fit. They fit together for the background but not w/ the image. Just focus on variety really.
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Aug 23 2006, 02:42 PM
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 Mais je ne l'aime pas Group: Member Posts: 971 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,135 |
The colors are...dingy for my taste.
The blending is quite nice, though. I think more brushes would be appropriate. |
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| *This Confession* |
Aug 23 2006, 05:03 PM
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Its kind of blurry in some places, but it is pretty. The brushes are a little out of place, perhaps adding a little more?
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Aug 23 2006, 05:43 PM
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 & my dreams fall down Group: Member Posts: 1,173 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 291,336 |
The blend is good, but the splatters don't go well at all, and I don't like the ripped part.
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Aug 23 2006, 06:58 PM
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 i'll spend forever loving you. Group: Member Posts: 571 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 431,524 |
it's good. the pictures don't seem too good of quality to me though and that black/gray/white blur thing is a distraction to me. but good job with the blending and stuff.
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Aug 23 2006, 07:56 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
I like your blending.And the choice of font.But the splatter and colors don`t fit as much to me.I think lighter colors would go more.And maybe lowering down the opacity of the splats and adding different brushes.
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Aug 23 2006, 08:44 PM
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<3 Group: Member Posts: 455 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 445,104 |
I love your choice of colors and the blending is great=).
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Aug 24 2006, 11:11 AM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
the blending is great. The transition from your blend to the background could be a bit smoother though =) But besides that, lovely
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Aug 28 2006, 03:40 AM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 7 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 458,833 |
QUOTE(mizz_americaz @ Aug 24 2006, 12:11 PM)  the blending is great. The transition from your blend to the background could be a bit smoother though =) But besides that, lovely I couldnt agree more. |
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