My two poems |
 May 24 2004, 02:26 PM
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 Perfectly Flawed  Group: Member Posts: 1,913 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,652  |
I guess you could call these poems... I have no talent, lol. Oh well, here ya go.
------------------------------- I am war, I am pain, I am all you couldn’t slay, I am sorrow from the fight, I am the fear in the night. I am the tear in your eye, I am the pain in your heart, I am the end of the start. I am all this despair that you’ve felt, I am the sin that causes you guilt. I am the dream that’s out of reach. I am the person, you couldn’t be. ----------------------------------------------- I can feel all this pain. I can feel this distain and betrayal. I can feel all of these dreams out of reach. I can feel it all crashing down on me. I can feel the weight breaking me. Everything that I have ever cared for, Everything that I have ever loved, It all seems to slip away. Yet all of this pain and despair, It all seems to stay. Its like all of this is not real. Its as if it’s a dream. I don’t want to be. I don’t want to feel. All I want is to wake up… Awake from this unreal dream. |
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May 24 2004, 02:39 PM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
QUOTE I am war, I am pain, I am all you couldn’t slay, I am sorrow from the fight, I am the fear in the night. I am the tear in your eye, I am the pain in your heart, I am the end of the start. I am all this despair that you’ve felt, I am the sin that causes you guilt. I am the dream that’s out of reach. I am the person, you couldn’t be. you appearently like Dimmu too. 
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May 24 2004, 02:52 PM
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Perfectly Flawed Group: Member Posts: 1,913 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,652 |
Ya, I stole the first two lines from that song. Thats all though... I think. lol
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May 24 2004, 02:55 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,245 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 17,033 |
oo a jocker we got ourselves a 2 lined jocker thats your new name!
o and yes nice poems there!
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| *Kathleen* |
May 24 2004, 04:33 PM
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*Applause* Yay! Woo! Go Jordan! *Puts on cheerleader outfit and cheers Jordan on*
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May 24 2004, 06:18 PM
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 Dark Lord of McCandless Group: Member Posts: 2,226 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,761 |
This poetry just inspired me to type from memory William Ernest Henley's poem, Invictus. Very inspirational I think. Especially with Thrones and Patriots or Red Army Chorus Music :).
Out of the night that covers me, Black as pitch from pole to pole, I thank whatever Gods may be, For my unconquerable soul. In the fell clutch of circumstance, I have not winced nor cried aloud, Under the bludgeoning of chance, My head is bloody but unbowed. Beyond this place of wrath and tears, Looms but the horror of the shade, And yet the menace of these years, Finds and shall find me unafraid. It matters not how straight the gate, How charged with punishment the scroll, I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul. |
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May 29 2004, 07:23 PM
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 Look its... Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767 |
wow. thats cool and it ryhmes. i cant get my poems to rhyme. its hard for me
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May 29 2004, 07:48 PM
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QUOTE wow. thats cool and it ryhmes. i cant get my poems to rhyme. its hard for me Hehe aww...don't say that. I'm sure it would work if you put your mind to it!
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