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Poems for all the CB writers
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post Apr 29 2004, 07:23 PM
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For the poet in us all. Dunno if this is the right place for the thread, but here ya go. Feel free to post your poetry... And be open to criticism (hopefully constructive!). Here's one of mine...
Hope you like it. And give some cc plz...Ty

Moral Anaesthesia

We were always barred behind
each other's private walls;
with miles of air and oceanic mass,
words unspoken behind bullet-proof glass.
Helpless and stuck in a mere illusion,
a fleeting moment past much too soon;
the promise of God to a fool,
beauty too pure to ever be true.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

Tonight you tore down all dreams
built with white lies and deceit.
Where I once stood comfortably numb,
I weep and rot deaf, blind and dumb;
Feast in misery like cheap red wine,
the easiest substitute for the truth.
Moral anaesthesia, morphine for the soul -
the price you pay, for losing control.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.
 

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AzN_AssAul']['   Poems for all the CB writers   Apr 29 2004, 07:23 PM
mer   this is really old. its kind of a song i made up b...   Apr 29 2004, 07:43 PM
fiji_kid   i really love this part QUOTEI bite my lip as I ...   Apr 29 2004, 10:19 PM
angel-roh   wow all u guys have such a wonderful poem!...   Apr 29 2004, 10:25 PM
omg_melface   i posted one of mine before.. it got lost somewher...   Apr 29 2004, 11:09 PM
LinknPrk__003   This is also in my xanga.... SAD POEM God saw yo...   Apr 29 2004, 11:37 PM
PinoyOtaku   Title: Alone... Alone... That is what I am, No on...   Apr 30 2004, 08:07 AM
mystical   hrm..i wanna try I'll be your guardian angel ...   Apr 30 2004, 08:26 AM
instantmusic   cruelty of life or death help me he said and i we...   Apr 30 2004, 12:44 PM
CJ1   Wow. You people are good writers. I rhyme things, ...   Apr 30 2004, 06:26 PM
*Nina*Renee*   aww, i love poems!!! These are good a...   Apr 30 2004, 06:28 PM
kaleidoscoped   QUOTE(AzN_AssAul')[',Apr 29 2004, 8:23 PM]...   Apr 30 2004, 07:23 PM
AzN_AssAul']['   hey, u guys are good. these are great but i like ...   Apr 30 2004, 07:40 PM
AzN_AssAul']['   Sorry for double post Here's another poem I...   Apr 30 2004, 07:47 PM
F_L_I_P   Why am I crying? Why am I lost? Why did I stop? Pl...   Apr 30 2004, 10:40 PM
InfamousOwen   Yesterday tears were on my face Today my anger has...   May 11 2004, 04:27 AM
hybrid   I lack poor sense of judgement, but I was told by ...   May 11 2004, 02:49 PM
TiNaBaBY074   wow..thats powerful..i like it a lot   May 11 2004, 03:12 PM
Kathleen   Hehe aww thanks, Tina...and thank you, Kim for pos...   May 11 2004, 03:56 PM
onenonly101   America, The so-called Beautiful America the be...   May 11 2004, 05:07 PM
Haruka   Wow! all your poems are so nice! I'd l...   May 16 2004, 01:31 AM
CEP   Haiku By: Chinkieeyedpnoi Isn't it funny How ...   May 16 2004, 01:35 AM
Kathleen   Hehe. I love it, Jose.   May 16 2004, 01:38 AM
[X]poised   sing me my song - by melissa (i made it up in math...   May 16 2004, 01:49 AM
squ34ki   Drops from Above Stared out through the window On...   May 16 2004, 03:33 AM
lil boi   sorry p.p.l. i'm not much of a poet. ::jerry:...   May 16 2004, 11:13 AM
RiddleMeWonders   Tell me what you guys think about it... and whatev...   May 27 2004, 03:38 AM
franceass   these are really good ...   May 27 2004, 09:36 AM
XaZnX07   i never knew i could rite poems untill i fell in l...   May 27 2004, 07:41 PM
XaZnX07   heres another one i wrote SITTING HERE THINKIN...   May 27 2004, 07:44 PM
XaZnX07   and another one If ther were no words If there we...   May 27 2004, 07:46 PM
XaZnX07   this one is my all time favorite that i wrote but ...   May 27 2004, 07:49 PM
ryfitaDF   the following work is one i just created and think...   May 29 2004, 12:29 AM
LatinaLady   wow everyones poems are good!!! i ma...   May 29 2004, 07:20 PM


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