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Tattooed Cherry Blossums, a new DIV layout, hopefully this one's better ^^;
Deidara xD
post Aug 8 2006, 02:24 PM
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Please visit my MYSPACE and check it out.

I made this this morning, but I liked the feel of it.

Feel extremely free to critque this in anyway.
It helps alot ^^

And feel free to compliment me..
It makes me feel better about the critiquing part shifty.gif

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post Aug 8 2006, 02:34 PM
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Mm, it's okay. The image is very, very bright. And there's a lot of red.

And the image is overwhelmingly big.
 
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post Aug 8 2006, 02:36 PM
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I like it
the colors nice and so's the design
only, its difficult to read the text
and the navigation is kinda hard to find
but other than that...
I think its cool

oh and the image seems to be of a bit
low quality
 
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post Aug 8 2006, 02:39 PM
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Better, definitely better. The image is reeeeally big, I suggest downsizing it and saving it in a high-quality jpeg. You've got the coding down pat, but I think you need to work on making your image smaller so that it complements your content and isn't just the main centerpeice. But like I said, you're coding is excellent and creativity is obvious, but try aiming for simplicity. Overall, good job. (:
 
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post Aug 8 2006, 02:42 PM
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Not a fan of the horizontal scrollbars. hammer.gif I like the creativity of this. But ithe brushes just seem a bit overused. But overall, niceee.
 
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post Aug 8 2006, 04:34 PM
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You're always changing you're layouts ehh. (x I like the creativity of the image but you used way too many brushes. o.O It looks good though, and it's really huge, like everyone said.

I suggest you to change the color font in the comment box. The color font is red and the background image part is red as well, so it's hard to see what people are typing when they want to comment you. I think you should change the font color to black. o.O
 
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post Aug 8 2006, 06:35 PM
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Thanks to everyone who commented. throb.gif

I seems I have awhile to go, but as long as I have people being as honest as they can and pointing out my mistakes, I'll be okay ^^

Okay, so I know now.. *takes out a list*

To not make the image so big.
To not use up my brushes(but I love my brushes, lol)
Not to make the image too bright or the center of attention.
And my ajustments and alignment need work.
Work on coloring my text x.x(arugh! I know, but sometimes its hard picking the color, but I'll try my best!)
And no horizontal scrollbars!

*nods* Got it! happy.gif

And never fear, come in two days time watch I'll have another layout for you wonderful guys to critique! laugh.gif


THANKS AGAIN! wave.gif
 
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post Aug 8 2006, 06:38 PM
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So, can this be closed?
 
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post Aug 9 2006, 05:55 PM
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hmmm, its pretty cool but just a tad bit to busy for me, also its kinda hard to read your text but i can get by. you have a very large just black space up at the top so i duno you might want to fix that.
 
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post Aug 11 2006, 02:49 PM
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u agree tooo busy
 
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post Aug 13 2006, 05:12 AM
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Thanks again for everyone's contributions~

And, yeah this topic can be closed~
 
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post Aug 13 2006, 12:00 PM
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hmm
I really like this
although part of the profile still peeks out on the right side and the background is like grey
perhaps change it to black?

CODE
<style>table, td {background-color:transparent; border:none; border-width:0;}
body{
background-color:000000;</style>



Although over on the bottom in the div areas I don't think the little splatters or circles what ever they are really match and the flower things going in to the div areas it makes the image look really low quality. Perhaps change the font color, its really hard to read. pinch.gif




opps


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