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 Sep 6 2005, 12:10 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
when the wind blows i can hear it cry
as our emotions begin to say goodbye just like how a river flows into the sea even if we're apart you'll always be here with me i whisper in the air and watch the words fly by i watch the wind as it carries the tears i cry laying down under the blanket of stars wondering how to get to you, is it really far? looking out into the horizon as the sun sets it smiles back at me to never forget even if i'll wait forever ill always be waiting in this life or the next its your love im saving |
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Sep 7 2005, 05:47 PM
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 o.O Group: Member Posts: 47 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 219,809 |
its nice, but it kinda makes me sad though.
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Sep 8 2005, 12:31 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Beautifully written. I especially liked this one line, "i whisper in the air and watch the words fly by.."
Nicely done :) Very romantic, very heartfelt. I think you did a wonderful job :) |
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Sep 5 2006, 12:32 PM
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wow haha thanks, i know like 1 year response late
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