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 Jul 28 2006, 08:45 AM
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I made this for a band  Edit by Kristina: Be sure to thumb large images :) |
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Jul 28 2006, 01:09 PM
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I think you should center it, and make the white lines dissapear as they ge t futher from the text
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Jul 28 2006, 01:32 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
I pretty much agree. For the white lines/brush you should lower the opacity.
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Jul 28 2006, 02:05 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
I think you should add less lines on the left and lower the opacity.
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Jul 28 2006, 06:58 PM
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i agreee with all, toattally agree on all. look okay
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Jul 29 2006, 01:27 AM
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Um... the text is reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeealy hard to read
*get's readin' glasses* not that it's tiny it's just.... blegh and it's plain, or is it supposed to be because it's a shirt design or something? |
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Jul 29 2006, 12:29 PM
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yeah kinda like a patch or something. idk what they were using it for
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Jul 29 2006, 01:06 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
everything is just too bold
the text is too huge and unreadable and there wasn't alot of thought put into the brushes and their placement Personally, I think you should use a lighter color for the brushes. They shouldn't be the main part of your peice since they are part of the background. I would also rethink the type of brushes you used. Also make the font different or smaller. It would be cool if you put "rits" somewhere on the picture, then added paint splatters and paintmarks of different colors splashing out from behind it |
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