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post Jul 28 2006, 11:16 AM
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I'm submitting this one to another colourizing comp, but there's something I don't like about it. I just can't figure it out... maybe the lips?

IDK, C&C welcome. :)
 
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post Jul 28 2006, 11:28 AM
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ITS THE EYES!!! lol i dont know, but the eyes really do look a lil plain
 
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post Jul 28 2006, 12:27 PM
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the eyebrows look kinda orangey you could make them a bit browner or darker. the eyes. hmm you should maybe change the eye shadow so it glittery and more noticable. i think everything else looks amazing! :)
 
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post Jul 28 2006, 02:04 PM
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I think you should add eyeshadow.Her lips stand out a lot.Its pretty though.
 
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post Jul 28 2006, 02:05 PM
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^ yeah, i agree. add some makeup. i like her lips, though.
 
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post Jul 28 2006, 03:04 PM
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I like the lips too, change her eye color, and maybe add some eyeshadow?
 
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post Jul 28 2006, 03:14 PM
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I don't really like the hair color for some reason.
To me it just doesn't seem to match the skin.
Agreed with everyone else.
Probably change the eye color.
Other than that.
Amazing job! flowers.gif
 
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post Jul 28 2006, 06:57 PM
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iono, somethings wrong though, but i cant seem to find it,!!! argh looks good though
 
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post Jul 28 2006, 08:49 PM
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I think the overall skin tone is too orange - as if bright yellow stage lights are hitting her at point blank range.

I suggest softening her skin and contrasting the eyebrow a bit more.

I really like it though - I don't have the patience for colourization...
 
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post Jul 28 2006, 08:50 PM
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make her eyebrows the same color as her hair...thicken up her eyelashes because that will make her eyes stand out more (since you have a light color on the lips the eyes should stand out)...also add some sort of color to her eye lids...i think she would be pretty with green eyes..._smile.gif
 
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post Jul 28 2006, 09:07 PM
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all the colors are a bit off.
the hair seems to pink
the skin seems too orange and too bright
then the eyes are shocking because they are amazingly white agains the bright skin tone.
Also, everything just kinda one color in this piece. Maybe if you added some fun colors to the background, that would fix that problem. Color everything! hehe the earrings, eyebrows etc =P

Basically, I think it will be fine if you just spend some more time adjusting the skin color.

The colorizing skills you have are phenominal. For this piece, it's just a matter of fixing up the colors =) You are talented at coloring, so keep it up
 

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