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Jul 28 2006, 11:16 AM
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![]() when you smile, i melt inside ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,325 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 267,089 |
![]() I'm submitting this one to another colourizing comp, but there's something I don't like about it. I just can't figure it out... maybe the lips? IDK, C&C welcome. :) |
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Jul 28 2006, 11:28 AM
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ITS THE EYES!!! lol i dont know, but the eyes really do look a lil plain
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Jul 28 2006, 12:27 PM
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the eyebrows look kinda orangey you could make them a bit browner or darker. the eyes. hmm you should maybe change the eye shadow so it glittery and more noticable. i think everything else looks amazing! :)
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Jul 28 2006, 02:04 PM
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![]() the name is ada. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
I think you should add eyeshadow.Her lips stand out a lot.Its pretty though.
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Jul 28 2006, 02:05 PM
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![]() Krista. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,380 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 391,319 |
^ yeah, i agree. add some makeup. i like her lips, though.
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| *StanleyThePanda* |
Jul 28 2006, 03:04 PM
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I like the lips too, change her eye color, and maybe add some eyeshadow?
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Jul 28 2006, 03:14 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 253 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 444,287 |
I don't really like the hair color for some reason.
To me it just doesn't seem to match the skin. Agreed with everyone else. Probably change the eye color. Other than that. Amazing job! |
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Jul 28 2006, 06:57 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
iono, somethings wrong though, but i cant seem to find it,!!! argh looks good though
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| *digital.fragrance* |
Jul 28 2006, 08:49 PM
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I think the overall skin tone is too orange - as if bright yellow stage lights are hitting her at point blank range.
I suggest softening her skin and contrasting the eyebrow a bit more. I really like it though - I don't have the patience for colourization... |
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Jul 28 2006, 08:50 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 104 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 433,052 |
make her eyebrows the same color as her hair...thicken up her eyelashes because that will make her eyes stand out more (since you have a light color on the lips the eyes should stand out)...also add some sort of color to her eye lids...i think she would be pretty with green eyes...
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Jul 28 2006, 09:07 PM
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![]() I intend to live forever-so far, so good. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
all the colors are a bit off.
the hair seems to pink the skin seems too orange and too bright then the eyes are shocking because they are amazingly white agains the bright skin tone. Also, everything just kinda one color in this piece. Maybe if you added some fun colors to the background, that would fix that problem. Color everything! hehe the earrings, eyebrows etc =P Basically, I think it will be fine if you just spend some more time adjusting the skin color. The colorizing skills you have are phenominal. For this piece, it's just a matter of fixing up the colors =) You are talented at coloring, so keep it up |
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