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Shine for me, Poem made by me [Critics]
LatinaLady
post May 29 2004, 06:45 PM
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i made this poem formy reading class andig ot the pic off the internet.
what do you think of it?



I made the sun represent God
 
Just_Dream
post May 29 2004, 06:47 PM
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I think it's sweet but I think I'll move this to writing. Cool poem the picture's cool too =P
 
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post May 29 2004, 07:14 PM
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thankz i didnt know we had a writing forum hammer.gif *slow me*
 

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