A Perfect Love Last Forever~ Acrostic Poem, a heh. Not. |
 Jul 11 2006, 12:22 PM
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 SockCicle  Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 131,761  |
And how do you see me?
Perfection at ever turn? Ecstacy that you yearn? Refinement and style? Fraction of a happy smile? Expectations gone awry? Congeniality, and lots of lies? Thought my thoughts you could see? Losing myself in your gullible eyes. Outstanding that you believe my cries. Very true it is that I have sinned. Even though I'll move on much like the wind. Longing I am just to say, As long as you live, you will pay. Silent as an old church mouse. Thrusting out the daring jousts Smiling like life is fare Fare is for the weak with care. Originality I'll give you that. Respect is something I do lack. Even though I am perfection. Varying past my reflection. Ending this with many rhymes. Rotten is to love as spent is to dimes. |
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Morbid_Poetry_4eva A Perfect Love Last Forever~ Acrostic Poem Jul 11 2006, 12:22 PM
Angelina Taylor It's not bad, although I get the feeling that ... Jul 11 2006, 10:03 PM Morbid_Poetry_4eva "And how do you see me?"
"Thought ... Jul 12 2006, 11:07 AM
Angelina Taylor I see, but don't just write it there because i... Jul 12 2006, 11:43 AM Morbid_Poetry_4eva Just so you know. i really do appreciate your comm... Jul 13 2006, 10:44 AM  |
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