Poem/Song, tell me what you think.. Options

[GothpunkGClover]

This is my song/poem
No its not okay
By Sal Plasencia


Is it okay If I cry today?
To make you realize
The aweful things you said
Is it okay if cut my self again
maybe once or twice three times
its all the same baybay
Now Is it okay? if i fall into you're lies
when you look in to my eyes
yeah i know you sure do care.

These emotions coming from my head
I wanna stay sleep in bed till im f**ked and dead
These feelings that I hate
I wanna kill them now
whats your deal all about..

Chorus:
No its not okay if you play me once or twice
to make me realize that you hate me
No its not okay if you break my heart again
and shoot me through the very last bloody vein.
No its not okay, no its not okay.

is it okay? if i cry today..to make you realize
the aweful things you say..