The Wrong Blues, criticism? Options

[AngelinaTaylor]

Breathe in and out.

I see you at the piano,
playing the blues,
though the wrong blues..

for dreams cannot be easily altered,
even after consideration.

Now all this contention
continues to destroy the air.

You press the right chords,
the right amount of sound,
yet it's still the wrong blues.

Fidelity and perception
have gone in the wrong direction,
informally.

And my green make-up
still abides on me.