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Peace, Please
emberfly
post Apr 22 2008, 09:05 PM
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Bombs bursting
children crying
the sound of guns
firing at a loved one
putting an end
to a precious life

Tears falling
blood stained streets
children's parents taken;
kidnapped by the icy
hands of death.

I sometimes ponder,
why do we destroy,
or meddle in the affairs
of strangers
from other worlds?

Why do some find it just
to relieve their brothers
of the most precious
gift of all?

Stop the madness
get out now
before our world
comes to a painful end.


// edit:

this is an assignment for my reading class. I've written 5 poems so far; this was my 5th try. I can post the other four, but only if you want. I doubt they're worth posting.
 

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emberfly   Peace, Please   Apr 22 2008, 09:05 PM
Tungster   MOVED TO WRITING   Apr 22 2008, 09:06 PM
superstitious   QUOTE(Tungster @ Apr 22 2008, 09:06 PM) M...   Apr 22 2008, 09:06 PM
emberfly   QUOTE(superstitious @ Apr 22 2008, 09:06 ...   Apr 22 2008, 09:14 PM
superstitious   QUOTE(emberfly @ Apr 22 2008, 09:14 PM) i...   Apr 22 2008, 09:15 PM
XTC   I got confused QUOTESorry, some required files are...   Apr 22 2008, 09:10 PM
emberfly   oh no! I just realized I made that typo. Sorry...   Apr 29 2008, 09:23 PM
Bishinobi   Pretty Good I think.   Apr 29 2008, 09:27 PM


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