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swaying
post Jun 19 2006, 05:24 PM
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i need ppl to check my site out and give me some cc..

my site

please and thank you!
 
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post Jun 19 2006, 06:36 PM
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mezmerising.tk You put a comma instead of a period, please correct your link =)

blend at the top is okay. Alot of the brushes look out of place. And the random low opacity pictures in there arent grea either. the background doesn't repeat. And, the pink background is REALLY bright. Coding looks okay. Very default looking though. You might want to fix the background, and change the line-height and link colours. try CSSzengarden for some tips.

It could use some work, but it's okay if this is your first. Nice try.
 
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post Jun 19 2006, 06:54 PM
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i was trying to go for randomness...thanks though
 
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post Jun 19 2006, 07:02 PM
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I pretty much agree. I find the header well done, but color randomness doesn't really work. The links background color is pretty random but it fits in a way. The hot pink background on the other hand is too out there. It doesn't match anything. I think you can aim for randomness but try to match the colors a little bit next time. I think the content would look better if it wasn't centered and maybe the same width as the header and that it lined up with the header. The links are default blue. I really like the header though, but I find the rest a ltitle too random.
 
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post Jun 19 2006, 07:33 PM
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wow everything looks different on my computer.
 
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post Jun 19 2006, 07:46 PM
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I use safari . So yea. This is how it looks for me.
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But it looks the same in Firefox.
 
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post Jun 19 2006, 08:02 PM
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I understand you want to go for that random feel, but even those random feels are well-put together.
Blending is great, but maybe the brushes should be more strategically placed.
Oh, and play around with the "mesmerizing.tk" font.

Why no border or background for your content?
 
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post Jun 20 2006, 01:22 AM
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i like using different fonts (some fonts are hard to read) but for my site i wanted to keep it simple and readable.
and i didnt know that the bg was that bright for all of you...
i just wanted it to match the bg.
 
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post Jun 20 2006, 01:03 PM
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Hmm.. its okay. I like the main image, but the content is just kind of.. there. idk its weird&hard to explain.

Also, the links are misaligned
 
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post Jun 20 2006, 02:29 PM
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it takes to long to load.
 
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post Jun 20 2006, 02:44 PM
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it's okay.
er kinda boring. :|...
takes FOREVER to load
 
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post Jun 21 2006, 09:41 PM
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thanks yalll

someone close this post please?
 
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post Jun 21 2006, 10:59 PM
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QUOTE(swaying @ Jun 21 2006, 7:41 PM) *
someone close this post please?


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