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*Kathleen*
post May 21 2004, 07:54 PM
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Just when you think life is pretty good
Life screws you over like you knew it would
Nothing goes right, it all comes crashing down
You watch as it comes burning to the ground
All your hopes and dreams collapse in seconds
The gun stares at you and it's you it beckons

Who are you, please explain?
Only a nobody, completely insane
Would they care if you're gone?
They wouldn't even need a "so-long"
One out of millions, no one cares
Tried and tried searching to find no one there

Months have died, they've moved on just fine
No one has cried; I lay in the lonely grave of mine

Looked and looked inside of me
Nothing, just a pathetic tragedy
Just a heartfelt ransom to nothing
She just needed some encouraging
Now she's gone forever more
She never knew she meant a whole lot more
Once again, the apologies came too late
Here to eternity, she is no one; yet, she still waits
 

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Kathleen   No one   May 21 2004, 07:54 PM
EmeraldKnight   Wow.. realli well written.. a tad cynical and depr...   May 21 2004, 07:55 PM
xjjajeengx   really really factual and relly nice. did you wri...   May 25 2004, 01:23 AM
x_angawhomps   Oy. *claps*   May 25 2004, 01:31 AM
angel-roh   wow kathleen did u write that all by urself? cus i...   May 25 2004, 01:52 AM
Kathleen   Hehe yes, I wrote it. Thanks Grace, Eve, and Susan...   May 25 2004, 06:37 PM
ComradeRed   I don't get along well with poetry. I'm mu...   May 25 2004, 06:43 PM
Kathleen   That's because you're a genius. I'm so...   May 25 2004, 06:49 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 6:49 PM)That...   May 25 2004, 06:55 PM
fiji_kid   nice poem.. :: but i dont get it.. iam not a p...   May 25 2004, 06:56 PM
Kathleen   You don't get my poem?   May 25 2004, 07:02 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 7:02 PM)You don...   May 25 2004, 07:11 PM
Kathleen   Yeah, it's about a suicidal person who dies wi...   May 25 2004, 07:16 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 7:16 PM)Yeah, i...   May 25 2004, 07:21 PM
Kathleen   Haha and that's supposed to comfort me...how? ...   May 25 2004, 08:02 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 8:02 PM)Haha an...   May 25 2004, 08:08 PM
orionpax   clear cut, dark, and expressive. like an ususpecti...   Jun 16 2004, 03:37 PM
Kathleen   QUOTElike an ususpecting knife in ure back in a mo...   Jun 17 2004, 11:50 AM


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