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 May 21 2004, 07:54 PM
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Just when you think life is pretty good Life screws you over like you knew it would Nothing goes right, it all comes crashing down You watch as it comes burning to the ground All your hopes and dreams collapse in seconds The gun stares at you and it's you it beckons Who are you, please explain? Only a nobody, completely insane Would they care if you're gone? They wouldn't even need a "so-long" One out of millions, no one cares Tried and tried searching to find no one there Months have died, they've moved on just fine No one has cried; I lay in the lonely grave of mine Looked and looked inside of me Nothing, just a pathetic tragedy Just a heartfelt ransom to nothing She just needed some encouraging Now she's gone forever more She never knew she meant a whole lot more Once again, the apologies came too late Here to eternity, she is no one; yet, she still waits |
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May 21 2004, 07:55 PM
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Wow.. realli well written.. a tad cynical and depressing, but powerful and good
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May 25 2004, 01:23 AM
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really really factual and relly nice.
 did you write it?
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May 25 2004, 01:31 AM
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Oy. *claps*
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May 25 2004, 01:52 AM
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wow kathleen did u write that all by urself? cus if u did...thats one awesome poem!! if u wrote that.... seems like ur sad!! awww cheer up^^
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May 25 2004, 06:37 PM
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Hehe yes, I wrote it. Thanks Grace, Eve, and Susan.
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May 25 2004, 06:43 PM
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I don't get along well with poetry. I'm much more of a prose person.
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May 25 2004, 06:49 PM
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That's because you're a genius. I'm sorry. I bow down to you.
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May 25 2004, 06:55 PM
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QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 6:49 PM) That's because you're a genius. I'm sorry. I bow down to you. Thank you. That was prose-ic. |
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May 25 2004, 06:56 PM
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nice poem.. :
 :but  i dont get it.. iam not a poem person 
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May 25 2004, 07:02 PM
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You don't get my poem?
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May 25 2004, 07:11 PM
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QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 7:02 PM) You don't get my poem? Isn't it about a suicidal person? We had to put you on suicide watch at the Bethel Tournament, remember? |
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May 25 2004, 07:16 PM
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Yeah, it's about a suicidal person who dies with no one to care for her after her death. Heh. It's really not that hard to comprehend.
 Yeah...I'll still be on suicide watch for the next tournaments, Minda...especially the ones I'll go up against you, Ralph, or Dan at. 
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May 25 2004, 07:21 PM
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QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 7:16 PM) Yeah, it's about a suicidal person who dies with no one to care for her after her death. Heh. It's really not that hard to comprehend. Yeah...I'll still be on suicide watch for the next tournaments, Minda...especially the ones I'll go up against you, Ralph, or Dan at. - Dan Boada is dead. (Ok, not really, but he was wounded in a track meet so he can't go to CFLs. If it happens again he might die). - I'm a senior. (Ok, not really, but everyone thinks I am. Maybe this applies to judges as well). - Ralph is Ralph. (Ok, not really, he's an evil robot controlled by John Ashcroft). |
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May 25 2004, 08:02 PM
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Haha and that's supposed to comfort me...how? Ack - wait.
 You're Minda, you never comfort me - you just scare me more. When did that happen to Dan? Ahh we need to stop acting like this is a chat. >_<
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May 25 2004, 08:08 PM
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QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 8:02 PM) Haha and that's supposed to comfort me...how? Ack - wait. You're Minda, you never comfort me - you just scare me more. When did that happen to Dan? Ahh we need to stop acting like this is a chat. >_<Dan was injured doing track... |
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Jun 16 2004, 03:37 PM
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clear cut, dark, and expressive. like an ususpecting knife in ure back in a moonlit graveyard. yum.
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Jun 17 2004, 11:50 AM
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QUOTE like an ususpecting knife in ure back in a moonlit graveyard. yum. Hehe. You know what, I was going for something like that. 
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