It's my fault, Poem |
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 Jan 11 2006, 10:44 PM
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 Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 33 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 224,772  |
Forgive me, I know not what I do.
Leave me, ween my codependance. Open my wounds, I'll bleed for you. Hurt me, you always find a way. It's my fault, it's my fault. Control me, I cannot control myself. Break me, maybe I'll disapear. Turn your back, I'm used to it. Mock me, you're not the only one. It's my fault, it's my fault. Call me stupid, it wouldn't matter. You act like I am, regardless. Curse me, I'm sorry I need you. Let me go, release your grip. It's my fault, it's my fault. Blame me, I blame myself. We all need a scapegoat. Guilt trip me, I'm numb. Bring me down, it doesn't matter. Does it? Dose it? Does it? It doesn't matter. I don't matter. You do it without feeling. Without remorse. And you do it, you do it... Without uttering a word. And it's my fault. It's my fault. It's my fault. Feedback please! Thanks so much =) |
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Jan 14 2006, 05:28 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
wow, i like it. I feel like i want to scream out to you, "no, it's not your fault!!" lol.
Blame me, I blame myself. We all need a scapegoat. Guilt trip me, I'm numb. Bring me down, it doesn't matter ^That part was really good, i enjoyed it. I could relate in a lot of ways too. Keep it up. |
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May 22 2006, 01:43 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 33 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 224,772 |
thanks so much, it feels good to have someone that relates.
And I really really apprechiate your feedback! :) |
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