Creature of the Night Options

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

The running water is cold tonight
While the night sky bathes the world with darkness
As my eyes invision the devious plot

Oh how beautiful she looked
With the moon's gaze gracefully enlightening her
Unaware of my lurking presence

Creature of the night
living among shadows
Silencing the hearts of the ignorant

Hear the the steps of the demon
Thundering silently in the silhouette's sanctuary
A demeanor so intriguing

The fair lady's heart beats faster
She hears the demon but fails to see
Blinded by night's embrace

"Who's there?" cried her wary voice

Her innocent face, innocent life
Infuriating innocence
The raging passion

To show her the real world
The real price
The real mask
of innocence

The desire to bask in her blood
Became uncontrolling
The key to her death grasped by the palm of my hands

Creep oh so silently
So silently
So silently

"WHO'S THERE?!" Distressed in the emptiness
How pitiful a creature

Slowly I crept behind her
Slowly
So slowly

A mistake at foot
An echo of a step in the ground

Turning so swiftly only for her eyes to meet
The rendezvouz of death

Pitiful creature
Silken dress bathed in blood
Met the eyes of death by my hand

Pitiful creature
Your ghostly face gazing at my hand
Your frigid skin stole the heat of my heart

Am I to be damned?
As I left she stared at me
As I stood she gazed at me

Her eyes, why can't they stop?!

She wears the mask of death
An aghast expression whose eyes
Slow and slowly pierced my body

Creature of the night dangling in the streets
Run from her gaze, her icy glare
You find your blood soaked in your heart's depths

Creature of the night
A pitiful creature
Guarded by the moon
Haunted by fright

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I know it's long but I couldn't find a way to shorten it. It's something I had to do for school. The prompt was to place my mind in a "derranged individual's" head. Did I capture it right?