My Heart Goes Out to You |
 May 9 2006, 06:55 PM
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 Koorime  Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135  |
My heart goes out
To the one in pain She's sitting there crying her tears that Stream down her face like acid She's so sad Her eyes are red She cries and whimpers Remembering all the good times That she had with him He's never going to Open his eyes again His heart's not beating it's lively tune It saddens me, Seeing her crying here It's not her fault It was just his time May he rest in peace. |
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May 9 2006, 07:53 PM
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 tell me more. Group: Official Member Posts: 2,798 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,640 |
i like it
its sad. |
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| *This Confession* |
May 10 2006, 01:46 PM
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all your stuff is sad..
why not write a happy one for once i would like to see how it is.. although most of your poems are good as well but i really actually like this poem.. so good job 
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May 12 2006, 04:25 PM
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I love it .. depressing
Its rad <3 :-) |
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